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June's "The Chronicle"
Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 4:30 pm
by Invincible
Gentlemen, it gives me enormous pleasure to (at long last) distribute the June edition of
The Chronicle. Whilst I wish I could take credit, I'm afraid that must go to my subordinates in the Federation News Service. Given the relatively experimental format (that is, .pdf) we're very eager to hear your comments, thoughts and suggestions on the aesthetics, as well as the content for July's issue.
You may find the
Chronicle here.
Re: June's "The Chronicle"
Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 4:43 pm
by Digi
Page 3 - Author Name
+ what happened to the Engineering info?
Re: June's "The Chronicle"
Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 4:50 pm
by Invincible
Digi wrote:Page 3 - Author Name
+ what happened to the Engineering info?
The conversation we had earlier will be in the July issue - the June issue represents, well, what happened in June. Apologies for its delay.
Re: June's "The Chronicle"
Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 4:51 pm
by D'Jay
Looks great! Just a idea though. i think we should post these on the STO forums in our recruitment thread as well.
Re: June's "The Chronicle"
Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 4:54 pm
by Invincible
D'Jay wrote:Looks great! Just a idea though. i think we should post these on the STO forums in our recruitment thread as well.
I like your thinking. Given the delay on the issue, we'll begin doing just that with the next one.
Re: June's "The Chronicle"
Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 4:59 pm
by Digi
Digi wrote:Page 3 - Author Name
Re: June's "The Chronicle"
Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 5:06 pm
by Ciaran
Ok besides that Author Name error it's a good start for a first time. It can only get better. Great work FNS!
Re: June's "The Chronicle"
Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 5:11 pm
by Alexraptor
Well done!
That's what i'm talking about!
Re: June's "The Chronicle"
Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 5:22 pm
by Picard
Bravo!
Re: June's "The Chronicle"
Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 5:23 pm
by Shroombuck
- The layout requires considerable updates;
- The author of the 'STO State of Mind' entry has been left blank;
- The images need to be of high quality;
- Try to keep the font the same;
- Try to write more in-depth articles;
- Try to make the layout in Adobe InDesign;